Thursday, March 7, 2013

Poetic Thurdays: In your presence


This poem was written sometime in th 2010 and i want to share it with you.Let me hear your thoughts on it.

IN YOUR PRESENCE

I'm helpless in your arms

Lost in your smile

I drown in your eyes

Weak in the knees from your kisses

I melt like a candle wax in your touches

My body shivers from d sound of your voice

I simply turn to water in your presence

Calm

Pellucid

And take any shape you want me to

28 comments:

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    1. @Toinlicious: You better don't choke.LOL

      @Atary: I guess.Hehehe

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  2. Isn't it good if she melt like a candle wax?lol I want her to...

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    1. It is good o.And you can make her to.LOL

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  3. I go love oh........hmmmmm....very intense

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  4. Wow, loved it! You have a way with words that is so real and believable. I wonder what it would be like with you one on one. Those lips are just so damn sexy..

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    1. I'm trying not to blush,but it's not working.Thanks alot for stopping by and the comment.

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    2. Please don't stay gone for too long! Your writings turn me and makes my day..Mwah..

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    3. Still waiting to be turned on by your words, come back

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    4. Would you be so kind as to letting me know who you are?

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  5. some pretty nice imagery u created there :)

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  6. Is this what you've been up to while i was away? tsk tsk tsk... ;)

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    1. Hehehehe What can i say Dosh? I missed you though.

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  7. hmmm... been a while I dropped in here. your poems are always intense. you are an amazing poets. still waiting for mine though.

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    1. Thanks alot Priscy and your poem may not come at all cos i'm not looking at upsetting you.LOL

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